The story was good. Perspective was new and I loved it. Mental thoughts carried on a bit and were somewhat repetitive. Although Axton seemed a wonderful sort of person who actually accepted and moved on to the best of his ability and was believable. I didn't like Leander all that much at times but I think that was the idea here.
The ending was abrupt and it seemed to need more of Axton and Leander working things out a bit more. Seemed more of a HEA for Axton and a HFN for Leander which left me fumbling.