Story was jumpy. From one chapter the MC's realize they are attracted to the next chapter without any explanation beyond 'he came over to drop off clothes I borrowed' and there is no dialogue, just right into sex. It takes almost half the book to get here and once here I am so don't care. I was hoping after they got it on, things would pick up or make sense. Nope.
And the 'visions' were easily explainable and happened so often in the story may as well been a story via visions.
Did not finish, maybe had I stuck with the story it would have gotten better. Who knows? Not me tell ya that.