Actually not a bad story just formulaic.(Well ok, I haven't read a lot of incubus stories so maybe the incubus is
different.) Anywho, the story is probably just fine however I can see what's getting ready to happen before it's going to happen. Just kind of boring. I didn't care enough to read the rest of the story.
Not going to rate because I think this is more my dislike of this 'type' of storyline than because it's not good.