Laugh out Loud!
I am pretty sure that a nineteen year old anybody doesn't say “Let me go, I tell you. I’ll kill you when I get up.” Most likely it would be 'Let me go you fuck!' or 'Let me go asshole!' NOT 'Let me go, I tell you.'
'I tell you' I'm sorry who says that? I'm pretty sure this book is set in this century.
So, I read and read again and said, 'no no it was one little thing keep reading maybe its a one off.'
OH NO HE DID NOT! Not 2 pages later.... dun dun dunnnn
Mr. Alpha Machismo spanks the 19 yr old while his 8 year old brother is in the bathroom of a hotel! (He was changing his clothes. The implied time frame here would be like what 3-4 minutes? Really not enough time to threaten and perform said spanking for cussing. And what the hell is that about?)
What the every loving fuck?
Ridiculous, I tell you!