It was too short. I wasn't taken in by either MC. I had trouble following scenes and had to read again to figure out what was said and meant. The ending was clipped. I enjoy Amy Lane's writing however this wasn't on of my favorites. And I did not get the explanation of 'Left on St. Truth-be-Well' that was given at the very end.
The whole 'mine' business was like out of left field. The 'I'm clean, you're clean' lets not use a condom was weird to say the least. The Mob stuff was ridiculous. The story could have been better had it had any depth to back up the beautiful wording and meaning used.