I loved it. I only had one issues: What happened to Ken's Mom and Dad. There was one call from his Mom and from what I gathered they had a good relationship so.... yeah. One call and nothing. Odd thing was when his Mom called she asked 'how is my wonderful granddaughter' that would preclude a good relationship. We did read about Patricks family so it wasn't as if the external families weren't included on either side.
Yep good story I like really it!