I liked the story. It reminded me of other similar books and that I liked them better. This was gay-for-you times two. (Ok, one had an inkling but then again one of them was going to have to, to start to ball rolling or the book wasn't going anywhere) Which is a first for me. Are there others out there like this one? If so, I don't know if I am going to seek them out. Just wasn't my thing.
The writing is great and the sex is steamy. Being that one of the MC's is being instructed on what to do, it could have gone either business like or sensual, definitely sensual.
The secondary story is sorta flighty. It's starts the story and then the romance becomes so much of the book, when you get back to the reason for how they got where they are, it's confusing. At the end it got hokey. Now don't get me wrong I love a good HEA with butterflies and kisses, however sometimes it gets so lovey dovey I just skip through. I guess it doesn't feel real to me. If I wanted 'over the top ooey gooey' I would get Chicken Soup for the Soul book.