I liked almost everything about this story except the intimate touches between the MC's that were happening off scene. When Peter's kids are home, Evan attempts to kiss Peter goodbye. Peter says no, no not in front of my kids. Up until this point there are touches but at this point I am unaware of kisses. Kisses are kind of a big deal so I am thinking this would have been good knowledge and missed opportunities to learn more about Evan and Peters evolving relationship
Since this story is a GFY/Coming out story I think those moments would have added to the story and to how Peter was handling Evans attentions. Other than that, I liked it.